if you can lie to yourself you can lie to the world there was a premise played it out it made sense at first she danced with knives and we thought the worse analogue privacy hers is a curse playing second fiddle talk less paid more but wallet smaller than purse misogynist or endure ads for beer entice lack of banter helps incite drunk bud exclaims shup ya whore switched from light sleepless nights hate monger bite, shite sight ,weak men a feminists delight, call you sis for spite, nut reduction megabits to bytes test her on his rights fight fuck nah take flight lost sight countin sheep at night to(o) rare the black backseat wool suede makes a comfortable ride but its high tide our species drownin feces brownin fleeses bound in cant move carryin a deadweight muck in my fur big fear now for the slur meow say the mice men then eclipsed bass clipped for the roar work all day come home she want help for her chore are headphones the cure punch the wall or punch the floor sanity on tour broken hand fool thought he was thor this rhyme scheme on course to bore demand change let them have the higher vocal range competitive the method is strange tired of trimmin pubes grow out the mane metro man bane wrecking ball carried by crane miley got a smiley when she was pissin in lanes quick duck here come feints micky mouse made saint dick tower sex spelled constellations required adult concentrations freekick hit a wall this knee drop boo from the fan respect the flag these colours ran pink out the washer queue the laugh can intolerance want a ban finally questioning whats in the spam can shit hit the fan cant blame woman blame man eyes poppin i yam what i yam defeated raam wont get that reference gears 2 was the sham met two viet brothers lum and the lamb welcomed on holidays still missed the stuffing and ham long time binh home had missed home i lost home what is home tonic like poem resolve on first word IF reality shift mythic figure become historical gift tupac on cross christ driveby clipped that be the rift an undeniable twist bloods wear blue not on santas list tangible dismissed if it makes sense to someone then they got the gist no repeat barcode the wrist but still the iconic white fist pump high snake low on the ground they lie so why is it the pharmacy sign to get healthy rich to richer get wealthy poor stand in line or work 9 to 5 discrepancy much thicker than a fine line theyre greed-alls theyre swine think their blood thicker than wine if you notice they say you whine like they spawn from divine lucky fucks found gold in a mine just took time i sense your gettin bored of this rhyme so, let me, go ski after i went to go see, polanski,ninth gate not bad, good movie, devil the only antagonist ever really written, bad guy big boots not fittin need a blender puss dropped in his kitten this was a long one ass cheeks numb from sittin cant wrap it up but atleast im admittin whats your excuse dad excess souls for ridden im just kiddin while father time keeps biddin let it make sense fibbin get tit take tents dub match in hand beg him dont burn me while sleepin millers were creepin i woke after blackout grass in my mouth got too close to a reapin.

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    if you can’t format the rhythm and the meter no one will give a shit because we are not doing it for you – popular opinion

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        Hey feel free to read my comment history lad I stand by every word ive ever uttered on this app but atleast read it within their repliant context.

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      Oh and one last point thats just it I dont care if you get it, if it goes over your head good then your not the target audience, he is. Theres not even a poetry community or lyrics community on lemmy right now kinda tells ya something dont it.

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      Your* so ignorant you dont even know it… I dont need you to do it for me if you can read and you have more than triple digit braincells it will make sense on different levels rather than me telling you how it should be read. Gobshite.