• HonoraryMancunian@lemmy.world
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    7 months ago

    Writing would be extremely boring without ever using adjectives.

    Correct. Still an extraneous usage of one here. The noun by itself is perfectly descriptive enough for this particular story.

    I also find it amusing you find gender has relevance to the story.

    Strawman. I don’t find it relevant. Wouldn’t have minded if they’d said “person” or “woman” or “dude” or “gal”. The single aforementioned descriptive noun suffices.